Steve Hockensmith on short stories
Well, not just short stories. But the author of the upcoming HOLMES ON THE RANGE takes the Q&A bait from Bob Tinsley at The Short of It about writing funny, how different it is to write novels and short stories, and advice to those wanting to break into short fiction markets:
TSOI: What pointers or tricks-of-the-trade would you give someone who wants to write a humorous story?
SH:
“Don’t try too hard” would be my first bit of advice. You can be funny
without being ZANY! or WACKY!. Droll is good. Dry is nice. I wish more
people would give wit a try. Then again, this is coming from a guy who
recently wrote a KOOKY! story for AHMM about Soviet spies kidnapping
Santa Claus, so maybe I’m being a hypocrite. Let’s move on.
I
would beg anyone who’s thinking of writing a hardboiled private eye
parody or pastiche to reconsider. Please. Maybe it was still funny the
third time they parodied The Maltese Falcon on Your Show of Shows, but
ever since then the “Sam Shovel, P.I.” shtick has been pretty tired.
Then again, this is coming from a guy who recently wrote a hardboiled
private eye parody (or, to be more precise, a parody of hardboiled
private eye pastiches) for an MWA anthology, so maybe I’m being a
hypocrite. Let’s move on.
I would advise genre writers shooting
for humor not to go for laughs at the expense of the plot or
characters. Have a real story to tell — even if it’s damn silly — and
don’t fall into the easy trap of making everyone a contemptible clod.
Yes, contemptible clods can be funny, but a universe populated with
nothing but contemptible clods isn’t funny — it’s actually kind of
depressing. If you’ve ever been to West Virginia, you know exactly what
I’m talking about. (Just kidding, Mountain State! A big shout out to
all my homies back in Matewan, Fraziers Bottom and Droop!) Anyway, as
this is advice I think I actually stick to pretty consistently, maybe I
ought to stop here.
Excellent advice, and read the rest of the interview as well for even more good stuff.